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May. 26th, 2016

writchcodex: Mystical Sand (Default)
Here comes another two-parter! After the last one, I'm excited, because it solidified my suspicions that maybe Takahashi just needs more space to come out with more substantive stories. True, there were still issues with the last two chapters, and they were a lot of the same ones I complained about in the one-shots. However, I realize that every writer has their weaknesses, and it may take a while for progress to be made on those little things. I also want to give credit where credit is due on how well Takahashi made me focus less on those little mistakes in unneeded dialogue and cheap drama tactics and more on the general picture as it was presented.

Which means this chapter has big shoes to fill. Let's test those out with a walk into Chapter 11.



Onward )
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