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Jul. 26th, 2016

writchcodex: Yami Grin (pic#13001722)
Yes, let the duel begin, because I think I nearly went permanently cross-eyed from how much non-action I was slogging through in the previous chapter. There's nothing wrong with character introductions, but when they're all happening at once and there's not much going on around them to temper them, it can get a tad boring. Pacing shouldn't be as much of a problem in this chapter, though, because WE HAVE ARRIVED.



Onward )
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